Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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- Creative Haiku - Aqua Blue -

underground rivers

                                    imprint in the limestone 

                                        s t o r m -

                                       in water glass






                                               19/03/2021
                                       Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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                                   Creative Haiku Poetry Contest
                               Sponsored by: Constance La France
                                          5 - 6 - 1- 4  syllables
                                        1st place in the contest

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Constance La France March 24, 2021 at 3:19 PM Anne-Lise, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative with Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this excellent non traditional Haiku, well done_Constance Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2021 at 3:59 AM - Many thanks for my place on your winning list, Constance ... haiku is one of my favorites ... but, I prefer 5-7-5 syllables :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Howard Kerr March 24, 2021 at 12:10 PM Congratulations Sunshine Smile on your first place podium win. Brilliant work. Thanks for congratulating me too. Howard Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2021 at 4:00 AM - Howard, thank you very much for your comments and congratulation :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Juliet Ligon March 24, 2021 at 8:23 AM Refreshing words! Congratulations! Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2021 at 3:59 AM - Thank you very much for your comments and congratulation, Juliet :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison March 22, 2021 at 4:36 PM Another beautiful haiku from you sweet Anne-Lise, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2021 at 10:55 AM - Jan, thank you very much for your comments and congratulation :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman March 22, 2021 at 4:30 PM This is wonderful, Anne-lise! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2021 at 10:55 AM - Thank you very much for your comments and congratulation, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich March 22, 2021 at 2:14 PM Way to go with your winning Ku, Sunshine. Congratulations Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2021 at 10:55 AM - Thank you very much Andrea, for your comments and congratulation :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann March 22, 2021 at 1:45 PM What a storm in a glass. Congratulations on your winning poem. Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2021 at 10:54 AM - Kai, thank you very much for your comments and congratulation :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger March 22, 2021 at 12:53 PM I am not sure which is the most gorgeous - the poem or the photo. Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2021 at 1:47 AM - Thank you very much for your comments, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith March 22, 2021 at 11:38 AM Congratulation on your win. Love your write and picture. "Beautiful/Wonderful" Have a blessed day/week......... Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2021 at 10:54 AM - Thank you very much for your comments and congratulation, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll March 21, 2021 at 12:37 PM Anne-Lise, absolute fantastic haiku with a perfect picture to match. So creative. Good luck in the contest. Sending warm hugs your way~ Warren Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2021 at 1:47 AM - Thank you very much Warren, for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

JC Brul March 21, 2021 at 6:20 AM What a striking imagery! Best wishes in the contest! Anne-Lise Andresen March 21, 2021 at 7:05 AM - Thank you very much for your comments, JCB :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick March 20, 2021 at 3:13 PM Very thought out work for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit with congrats to my page. Sara Anne-Lise Andresen March 21, 2021 at 7:03 AM - Thank you very much Sara, for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Howard Kerr March 20, 2021 at 1:33 PM Sunshine smile, Another classic work superbly written. Best wishes. Thank you for your soupmail Howard Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2021 at 2:09 PM - Howard, thank you very much for your comments and good wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier March 20, 2021 at 5:53 AM lovely ~ Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2021 at 1:56 PM - Thank you very much for your comments, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis March 19, 2021 at 5:47 PM Sublime Haiku dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2021 at 2:08 PM - Demetrios, thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu March 19, 2021 at 4:02 PM Hello Sunshine Smile , a beautiful photo . Enjoyed the Haiku. Hugs Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu March 21, 2021 at 10:44 AM Hello Sunshine Smile, yes i enjoyed both. Hugs Darlene. Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2021 at 2:08 PM - Thank you very much for your comments, Darlene :) - Glad you enjoy both :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sotto Poet March 19, 2021 at 3:40 PM Excellent haiku verses, best of luck in the contest. Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2021 at 2:06 PM - Thank you very much for your comments and good wishes, Tayeb :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Kauffman March 19, 2021 at 2:02 PM Still waters of creativity run deep in your elegant haiku, Anne-Lise, then wash over us in soothing blue. All the best for the contest. Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2021 at 1:58 PM - Beautiful colors, Sam - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Kavanagh March 19, 2021 at 1:51 PM Heya Anne Lise, recheck Constance’s rules, on the haiku contest, this is beautiful imagery, be a shame if disallowed, cheers David, delete this comment if you wish thereafter Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2021 at 2:05 PM - Only make a few small changes ... - Thank you very much for your comments, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire March 19, 2021 at 1:23 PM Beautiful haiku!! We have a lot of limestone in Florida and many of our rivers are fed by underground streams that do have the color like the photo. Eucalyptus has a lovely sent! Best wishes in Constance's contest. Hugs, Carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2021 at 2:04 PM - I was in an underwater cave in Spain many years ago ... it was wet, humid air and dark ... not impressive, Carolyn - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. March 19, 2021 at 8:03 AM WoW! Anne-Lise , This is a good entry for the contest. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2021 at 2:01 PM - Happy weekend and thank you very much for your comments, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar March 19, 2021 at 6:56 AM Very clever write with a grand finale. Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2021 at 2:00 PM - Thank you very much for your comments, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh March 19, 2021 at 5:36 AM Beautiful... imaginative, brilliant and vibrant, hues of azure promise... love it. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2021 at 2:00 PM - Gina, thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit March 19, 2021 at 5:18 AM Great images--the ending line makes an impact, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2021 at 1:59 PM - Thank you very much Vijay, for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham March 19, 2021 at 2:28 AM Love the image Anne, probably thousands of years old. Best of luck in the contest, hope you have a great day. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2021 at 1:58 PM - Definitely old, Tom - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)