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Creation - the Star of David

~Creation~
(Star of David)



God
Is the
Creator
He made the whole
Universe and formed man
The Bible doesn't explain where God just came from
But it says clear that He was always there
This is a mystery to me too
But I just believe, accept
God created all just perfect
In fact made us good and pure
Adam and Eve had wonderful lives
They ruled over everything God made
Adam just didn't have to work for a living
Didn't face pain or death
Till both did sin
After that
It was
Hell




Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2010


~Author's Notes:


The 'Star of David' is a poetry 
style created by Dorian Petersen Potter, aka ladydp2000,
on October 22, 2009.

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Diane Christian October 29, 2015 at 4:37 AM nice Dorian Petersen Potter November 7, 2015 at 10:21 PM Thank you ever so kindly,Diane, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate your kind visit, comments:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:)