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Creation Story Nursery Rhyme

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LORD GOD very great and mighty made the earth* that’s full of beauty… Light He gave out; oh, clearly bright the sky above, so high for flight… Also dry land, seas, plants and trees sun, moon, stars --- we see, but can’t seize… Fish and birds, plentiful to name animals like dogs of pet fame… our first parents, Adam and Eve all came from God Whom we believe.
*Genesis 1:1 In the beginning God created the heaven and the earth. March 26, 2021 2nd place, "Nursery Rhyme 3" Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper; judged on 4/5/2021.

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Date: 4/9/2021 12:13:00 AM
Lovely biblical poetry for children to recite and learn from Beata. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Belle
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Date: 4/7/2021 2:30:00 PM
Beautifully done beata, many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/7/2021 11:47:00 AM
- A long story that you made short for a child to learn ... lovely, Beata - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/6/2021 11:17:00 AM
Beata, congrats on your win with this sweet biblical nursery rhyme! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/5/2021 10:37:00 PM
Hi Beata, You penned a good “ nursery rhyme” poem. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a good evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/5/2021 10:21:00 PM
Beata, great rhythm in this great nursery rhyme in this spiritual write. Congratulations on your win. . Please join me at my blog Nursery Rhyme 3 Contest - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/26/2021 7:38:00 AM
Beautifully done, Beata... a wonderful nursery rhyme. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Date: 3/26/2021 6:41:00 AM
Amen. Yes it is important to introduce God to our children early in their lives.
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