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Creation

Roaming clouds move steadily south
A broad circulation
The golden sun still shines hidden
Peeking on creation

The noise of the day rises
Quiet almost gone now
Moments to hear soft bird calls
Nearly disappeared somehow

There is a dove cooing softly
A rooster crows a weak sound
All settled in the foggy hollow
As car tires nosily abound  
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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DiMino Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 6:18 AM
Beautiful writing! Great imagery!
Sathasivam Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 12:32 AM
Beautiful imagery write. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
Kendrick Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 3:41 PM
Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Thanks for the kind review..Sara
Horsman Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Wonderful Sara, you tell it so well,,
Allison Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 5:21 PM
wonderful imagery Sara a delight to read:-) hugs Jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 3:44 PM
Jan, thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to comment..Sara
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