Creation

Dawn Sun-fire Awe-rises Rose-laced delight Crown Earth Sun-plowed Life-bestowed Gold-waved of love Birth.

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Joseph White

Date: 6/30/2011 7:45:00 AM

I like the way you used so few words to convey such a beautiful story/picture, Thank You, really enjoyed ! Joe

The Fringe

Date: 6/1/2011 6:29:00 PM

I've been called a "light person" before. I think you may be too. Beautiful.

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/29/2011 7:10:00 AM

* “Kool * Like The Way That Your Talented Beauty Allows The Reader The Opportunity to Read As They May * Whatever Swirling Colours In They Might Find * Dear Precious & Beautiful CarolineCecil. * I In One Do Find Creations * Dawn * Rise * Sun * Gold * Birth * Welcome Back to Eternity. * Very Sweeet * Hugs & Kissses * Kisssses & Hugs * Sarah” *

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/20/2011 4:14:00 PM

Very nice flow and beautiful images. I enjoyed this. R.M.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/20/2011 1:26:00 PM

A beautiful image of creation, Caroline. All of the hyphenated words you created work so well together to show the birth of Earth. You're so creative! Thanks for stopping by and reading that loooong poem on teen pregnancy. The sponsor needed some more entries and I was trying to help out, but you and I both know the dangers of internet dating, don't we? You have a "gold-waved" heart, dear friend. I have a new contest posted if you have any interest. If not, that's fine. Love you, Carolyn

Cory Long

Date: 5/20/2011 1:22:00 PM

this had a great flow. nicely done. cory

Soulfire

Date: 5/20/2011 1:12:00 PM

Hi Caroline. I love the way you played with language here - enriched it. I read some stuff in English Lit many years ago - by Gerard Manley Hopkins - he did this a lot and I thought how absolutely brilliant it was - to stretch the boundaries of language - in an attempt to more fully capture what we feel/perceive. This is great. Cheers ~Soulfire~

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/20/2011 12:46:00 PM

Wanted to create original compound words not usually seen together, but making sense anyway with this, and that is what I came up with. :) Thanks for reading. Yours in poetry, Caroline.