Creating Is God

By lamp shaded light,
a proper low lit glow,
with pen, heart and might,
relaxed creating slow

praying just praying
"more to many God is,"
saying just saying
the whole of all in this

take the day to say
ideal's way to express,
"in only this I pray
rise, eat, live, love and dress!"

Dress up the truth so love
has an angle to show,
rhymes send higher above
a divine effort's go

and try why, why try
if all God says says all?
To cry more, more cry
to share God's spirits call

By lamp shaded light
a proper low lit glow
with pen, heart and might
relaxed creating slow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 8:42 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Richard. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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June 3, 2010 at 6:21 AM
Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your pens flowing with passion. Wishing you all the best in the finals You are such a great writer… love Leke
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May 31, 2010 at 2:06 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
Fisher Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 9:36 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
Brown Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 4:31 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Richard. Love,Carol
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February 10, 2010 at 11:28 AM
Richard, a worthy feature this week, Congratulations. Sincerely, Moses
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February 8, 2010 at 3:47 PM
nice feature!!
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February 8, 2010 at 11:15 AM
Congratulations on being featured on the home page this week with your poetry >> James
Brown Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 10:17 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more Richard. Love, Carol
Fisher Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 6:11 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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December 31, 2009 at 5:19 AM
confusable?? Oh yes the thinker, pondering the greater meaning?
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December 23, 2009 at 8:20 PM
I can see that you are a thinker..........very good writing!
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