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Creating Art

Splat! Explosion of color, Hits a canvas; A painting has begun. Big bang was the first; We’ll call this one, Little bang; A new Universe in our universe, Is born.

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Heidi Sands

Date: 1/16/2019 8:17:00 AM

Fun poem! I can see it too! :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/16/2019 12:57:00 PM

Oh good, then I'm glad. Thanks so much.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/16/2019 2:53:00 AM

You remember the line "you had me at hello?" You had me at "splat!" "Big bang was first. We call this one Little Bang." I laughed at that line.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/16/2019 12:58:00 PM

I know there is more than one way to take that; I was hoping for the rest of the poem to help with interpretation...something in me just had to write it.