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Splat! Explosion of color, Hits a canvas; A painting has begun. Big bang was the first; We’ll call this one, Little bang; A new Universe in our universe, Is born.
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Sands Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 8:17 AM
Fun poem! I can see it too! :)
Kiser Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 12:57 PM
Oh good, then I'm glad. Thanks so much.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 2:53 AM
You remember the line "you had me at hello?" You had me at "splat!" "Big bang was first. We call this one Little Bang." I laughed at that line.
Kiser Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 12:58 PM
I know there is more than one way to take that; I was hoping for the rest of the poem to help with interpretation...something in me just had to write it.
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