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I care I search your eyes in the morning when love was found sweet on grass-covered dew neath' the rays filtering through, now warming the courting of passions fell into view How soft the vision of your face at dawn surrounded by the gab light of silence where a picture of paradise is drawn as the eyes of the soul offer guidance We'll claim this moment as a memory and devour the emotions we've nourished keeps us in a dream state of reverie that stays when the morning's light has vanished We welcomed the choice of our surrender We have tethered our love to forever

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Date: 10/11/2023 7:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Date: 9/29/2023 2:30:00 AM
A lovely romantic sonnet with each verse showing devotion and yearning...as the eyes of the soul offer guidance.. Love that line..
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Date: 9/26/2023 11:38:00 AM
- Waking up together surrounded by silence in beautiful morning light ... a wonderful poem, Frederic :) - hugs
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Date: 9/25/2023 4:57:00 PM
Beautiful! So nice :)
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