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Creating a Memory

I care I search your eyes in the morning
when love was found sweet on grass-covered dew
neath' the rays filtering through, now warming
the courting of passions fell into view
How soft the vision of your face at dawn
surrounded by the gab light of silence
where a picture of paradise is drawn
as the eyes of the soul offer guidance
We'll claim this moment as a memory
and devour the emotions we've nourished
keeps us in a dream state of reverie
that stays when the morning's light has vanished
We welcomed the choice of our surrender
We have tethered our love to forever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hawley Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 7:09 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest.
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September 29, 2023 at 2:30 AM
A lovely romantic sonnet with each verse showing devotion and yearning...as the eyes of the soul offer guidance.. Love that line..
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September 26, 2023 at 11:38 AM
- Waking up together surrounded by silence in beautiful morning light ... a wonderful poem, Frederic :) - hugs
Sands Avatar
September 25, 2023 at 4:57 PM
Beautiful! So nice :)
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