Creating

Creating

If I create with a needle,
You are whispering in my ear,
“Punch here and close again,
Even and neatly, my dear.”

Without You I cannot bake a cake;
For all those You guided before,
Soil tilled, flour milled 
Hands and hands galore.

And when I create something 
Whether of beauty or amateur,
You created the joy it gives me,
Thank you, my God!

You I adore!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sands Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 6:28 AM
This is so nice Sunlite. Special and very uplifting! :)
Wanter Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 9:59 AM
Again, I appreciate you so much, Heidi.
Allison Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 5:38 PM
what a beautiful uplifting poem Sunlite thanks for sharing:-) hugs Jan xx
Wanter Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 6:23 PM
Hey, Jan, thank you for commenting.
Ashley Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 8:14 PM
Your appreciation shines Sunlite. A beautiful spiritual write.. Warmest wishes ~Susan
Wanter Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 6:22 PM
Thank you, Susan. I value your "take" on my poetry.
Gauthier Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 4:47 PM
sweet tribute of appreciation. Well done, Sunlite.
Wanter Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 6:21 PM
I appreciate your commenting.
One Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 9:11 AM
Wonderful spiritual poem..
Wanter Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 6:21 PM
Thank you, thank you.
Pandit Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 7:36 AM
I love the thought that created this poem..written beautifully, it communicates about the unknown force.
Wanter Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 6:20 PM
Thank you, Vijay, and I really like your poetry!
Michael Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 5:03 AM
Lovely realization, Sunlite...All the best
Wanter Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 6:20 PM
Thank you so much, Arturo.
Vaso Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 12:17 AM
Very beautiful and adoring poem! :)
Wanter Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 6:19 PM
I always appreciate your comments.
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