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Creating If I create with a needle, You are whispering in my ear, “Punch here and close again, Even and neatly, my dear.” Without You I cannot bake a cake; For all those You guided before, Soil tilled, flour milled Hands and hands galore. And when I create something Whether of beauty or amateur, You created the joy it gives me, Thank you, my God! You I adore!

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Date: 1/28/2018 6:28:00 AM
This is so nice Sunlite. Special and very uplifting! :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 1/28/2018 9:59:00 AM
Again, I appreciate you so much, Heidi.
Date: 1/22/2018 5:38:00 PM
what a beautiful uplifting poem Sunlite thanks for sharing:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 1/24/2018 6:23:00 PM
Hey, Jan, thank you for commenting.
Date: 1/21/2018 8:14:00 PM
Your appreciation shines Sunlite. A beautiful spiritual write.. Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 1/24/2018 6:22:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. I value your "take" on my poetry.
Date: 1/21/2018 4:47:00 PM
sweet tribute of appreciation. Well done, Sunlite.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 1/24/2018 6:21:00 PM
I appreciate your commenting.
Date: 1/21/2018 9:11:00 AM
Wonderful spiritual poem..
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 1/24/2018 6:21:00 PM
Thank you, thank you.
Date: 1/21/2018 7:36:00 AM
I love the thought that created this poem..written beautifully, it communicates about the unknown force.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 1/24/2018 6:20:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay, and I really like your poetry!
Date: 1/21/2018 5:03:00 AM
Lovely realization, Sunlite...All the best
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 1/24/2018 6:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Arturo.
Date: 1/21/2018 12:17:00 AM
Very beautiful and adoring poem! :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 1/24/2018 6:19:00 PM
I always appreciate your comments.

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