Created To Be Yours

Centered by you and your design,
in your sweet eyes the stars align.

Bright is the landscape near your heart,
you invited me in right from the start.

No wishful thinking just truth in spirit,
I'll sing my song so you can hear it.

Born to follow your shadow around,
your voice makes such a magical sound.

I'm in neck deep and won't let go,
there's purity in this love I know.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Gigno Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 11:55 PM
!!!
Williams Avatar
April 4, 2012 at 2:26 PM
Hey Deb, cool couplet you have here, true or not it is exactly right..hope you have entered my contest, you can do palindromes in your sleep, ..David
Wilson Avatar
April 4, 2012 at 6:03 PM
thanks so much David
Storm Avatar
April 4, 2012 at 12:26 PM
IM GLAD U FOUND HAPPINESS! THIS IS NICE DEB
Wilson Avatar
April 4, 2012 at 12:33 PM
this is fictional..I'm not with anyone..just using my imagination
Mclain Avatar
April 4, 2012 at 7:21 AM
I love the word choice. It does make you feel very loved. But I don't know if it's the period at the end of each line, but it seems very abrupt to me. I feel it needs to flow more. Lovely job. Keep it up.
Wilson Avatar
April 4, 2012 at 7:48 AM
changed it up a bit..do want the flow..thanks
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace