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Created To Be Yours

Centered by you and your design, in your sweet eyes the stars align. Bright is the landscape near your heart, you invited me in right from the start. No wishful thinking just truth in spirit, I'll sing my song so you can hear it. Born to follow your shadow around, your voice makes such a magical sound. I'm in neck deep and won't let go, there's purity in this love I know.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/1/2013 11:55:00 PM
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Date: 4/4/2012 2:26:00 PM
Hey Deb, cool couplet you have here, true or not it is exactly right..hope you have entered my contest, you can do palindromes in your sleep, ..David
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Deb Wilson
Date: 4/4/2012 6:03:00 PM
thanks so much David
Date: 4/4/2012 12:26:00 PM
IM GLAD U FOUND HAPPINESS! THIS IS NICE DEB
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Deb Wilson
Date: 4/4/2012 12:33:00 PM
this is fictional..I'm not with anyone..just using my imagination
Date: 4/4/2012 7:21:00 AM
I love the word choice. It does make you feel very loved. But I don't know if it's the period at the end of each line, but it seems very abrupt to me. I feel it needs to flow more. Lovely job. Keep it up.
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Date: 4/4/2012 7:48:00 AM
changed it up a bit..do want the flow..thanks

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