Created and Discarded

It's done, everything is over,
And I lie here on the floor.
I was once the centre of attention,
But now I'm not needed anymore.

I was there, important, I was valued,
When he shared his private thought.
He and I literally held hands together,
When he toured his mental walk.

The more he thought, the more I was,
And the more beautiful I became.
Until I was everything he wanted,
With a simple little name.

That's when he thought of another write,
About poems coming of age.
And he discarded me, forgot me on the floor,
His perfect poem on a page.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Janko Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 2:27 PM
Dear Lewis, I think every poet has the problem you so cleverly describe in this great poem. I first write my poems in a spiral notebook and at least half of them are discarded. Still looking for that perfect one! Lol! Great poem and a '7' from me as well. Betty
Grahamburglar Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 8:27 PM
Haha, I did that just earlier tonight. Well, I was writing using a computer, so it was more like a delete. But I discarded something I spent about 20 minutes on before deciding it wasn't quite what I was trying to accomplish. I really like this write, and I would imagine that many people on this site can relate. Haha. 7 from me. -G
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