Create a Vision

You can make it happen; 
One soul your soul can live that beautiful morning when 
a sigh of relief will wake you up today older a shorter life 
than yesterday due to the changes that occur as results of the 
passing time todays journey will heal all your bleeding wounds. 

If you don't fly with a strong personality you will be stuck 
in what you know and not discover what you don't know. 
Create a light to shine that would venture with your shadow 
while getting older to not hide behind it.
                                  
A vision that can wake up with you to move you forward grow 
in your depth to become present in time living up everyday 
in the same pattern is giving up on change and living moments 
are very short this is the moment to be strong seize that given 
moment set yourself loose even sense your sadness walk to wait 
for the midnight hour, count your stars talk to them tell them 
to be here tomorrow when you come back.
                                   
An illusion that you can accept the root of unconsciousness that 
can light up your night to touch the sky as you need not to predict 
the unpredictable and leave your damages behind to advance let 
your soul be very truthful to you and became addicted to life 
start visioning a light in your depth that you`ll never shut off.

Create choices to identify what`s in your mind now & that 
includes emotions to sleep by you. Ask yourself why you wanted 
to hide, why? from whom?  find the answer you know what ? 
silence is your pride change is your goal respect is what you are 
looking for and that is what makes you so special.
                                  
A vision that can tap into your worst days to deprive you from 
feeling vulnerable save your life to not hurt yourself listen to
the ticking clock a handle that remind you of the time passing 
don't grow up unhappy like most people do lift up yourself 
esteem as it doesn't fit picking up the pieces in a deserted island 
walk through a path where you can make a connection even 
with nature connect and create and walk. 

You can make it happen;
Listen to your heart today as you don't want to live 
anymore in a state of fear and want. 


                  Terry
                   7/3/2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/11/2013 11:47:00 AM
I THINK THE MIND IS A COMPLEX THING WELL WRITTEN WELLL SAID THANKYOU FOR YOUR COMENTS ON MINEXX DAVCIDSCOTT
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/11/2013 12:12:00 PM
Thanks David....Choices when made do help us a lot in this life.....xoxo Terry
Date: 1/11/2013 11:40:00 AM
We often create the vision but never execute it. I really enjoyed these thoughts you have shared. Excellent poem !!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/11/2013 12:11:00 PM
Thank you so much..you are right, but our vision is also a Choice...i will pass by your poems now.....xoxo Terry
Date: 1/11/2013 11:11:00 AM
I think as poets, we all try to create a vision of the inner feelings we want to express, and you expressed that sentiment very well in this work.
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/11/2013 11:20:00 AM
Thank you so much, have a great day. Terry
Date: 1/10/2013 2:15:00 PM
Everyone needs a vision or a dream for their life..Great way to express that..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/10/2013 2:44:00 PM
So nice of you to the lovely comment...i get encouraged to write more.....Thank You...Terry
Date: 1/10/2013 11:23:00 AM
Hi Therese, this is a really great write you have done, and full of good advice. Rollo
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/10/2013 11:39:00 AM
Thank you so much....Happy New Year......Terry
Date: 1/10/2013 8:42:00 AM
Terry; This is some great advice. It is just what I need to do. before I go nuts. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/10/2013 8:49:00 AM
Sorry Lucilla.....i got confused with the Reply....i would love to help more,my advice, do it yoursel, try your very best to clear your thoughts, and decide to live in the NOW....be happy Now. love Terry this is my email if u want.....tbacha@videotron.ca
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/10/2013 8:43:00 AM
Thank you Leonora.....i love your name...have a nice day...xoxo love Terry
Date: 1/10/2013 8:38:00 AM
This is an extremely beautiful poem you've penned my dear friend, Therese and this is absolutely true. Vision is really indispensable in our lives. Thank you so much for sharing, your precious time reading my work and your wonderful comments. love and hugs, Leonora
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/10/2013 8:50:00 AM
I pressed the wrong reply.....thank you so much.....xoxo Terry
Date: 1/10/2013 2:03:00 AM
Therese good message here...David
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/10/2013 6:50:00 AM
Thank you David so much......have a nice day...Terry
Date: 1/9/2013 11:15:00 PM
thoughts are deeds that intercede, and eventually they come, keep em coming yes indeed, till then the thought becomes...
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/10/2013 6:51:00 AM
Thank You Don so much......nice translation....xoxo Terry
Date: 1/9/2013 10:31:00 PM
Creating a vision is like creating a target or goal. Once you know the direction you want to go, then motivation takes over from there. Good write.
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/9/2013 10:33:00 PM
Thank you Robert....nice thoughts to......Terry
Date: 1/9/2013 9:43:00 PM
Terry you are quite a philosopher poet, I can see!! Some great reflective thoughts here. And thanks for your comment on my being a young looking grandma. I am nearing 60 in a few years, but lots of people tell me I pass for 40! Sure hope I can always stay a few decades in the past. hahaha.
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/9/2013 9:55:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, keep finding inner peace in your depth...and you will always remain young.......and remember, no matter what....Life is beautiful in the Now.....xoxo Terry
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