Crazy Valentine

My crazy valentine, once upon a dream you were mine but then you went away on a stormy rainy day. But that was long ago when I dreamed I loved you so. You made me laugh and smile and it was fun for a little while. And though I knew we’d never be I held you close to me and my heart began to beat once more when you knocked upon my heart's door. But it was just a dream, a very lovely dream and in it you loved me too but...it wasn't true. The dream suddenly turned black. You went away never to come back. The dream became a nightmare as you left me there. And now though I am strong for you sometimes I long remembering the time when I dreamed you were mine. And I weep to myself as I sit upon this shelf like a toy you put away that day on a stormy rainy day. How foolish I must seem realizing it was just a dream for I’m the crazy valentine to ever think you could be mine. By: Carole O’Terry Duet Copyright: 2/14/2019 “All Rights Reserved”
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Date: 2/20/2019 9:17:00 PM
I like and feel your poem. Thanks for linking the song, I have not heard it for so long. The 80's were a special time.
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Carole Duet
Date: 2/22/2019 12:22:00 AM
Thanks, Rob. Yeah, the 80's music was great...and i still love Crowded House. Carole :D
Date: 2/16/2019 10:00:00 AM
I think you are better off without him, if he loved you, then he would not have left you... I always enjoy your rhymes..
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Carole Duet
Date: 2/16/2019 12:28:00 PM
I know you are right, ZZ. Thank you. Carole ;D
Date: 2/16/2019 7:27:00 AM
Excellent write--I enjoyed reading your poem Carole.
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Carole Duet
Date: 2/16/2019 12:28:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay. Carole ;D
Date: 2/15/2019 8:35:00 PM
A very touching poem, Carole. Lovely.
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Carole Duet
Date: 2/16/2019 12:30:00 PM
Thank you, Line. Carole :D
Date: 2/15/2019 6:27:00 PM
As for me, I sense memories in this very well written lover's poem.
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Carole Duet
Date: 2/15/2019 6:32:00 PM
Yes, memories, memories. Thank you, Sunlite. Glad you liked it. Carole :D
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