Mad Hu Poet Free verse

Crazy Love

When I am with you,I feel swooned.                                   
  Its true you make my heart go zoomed.
  But never worry my love,
  I expect nothing.
  Just want to love you till I reach our moon.

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Cecilia Macfarlane September 28, 2012 at 9:56 AM So sweet and romantic...well written! Hugs Mad Hu October 4, 2012 at 12:22 AM Thanks :) Cecilia Macfarlane September 28, 2012 at 9:56 AM And a warm welcome to the soup!

Sheri Fresonke Harper September 9, 2012 at 10:13 PM Fun poem. I like the rhymes and the sense that being in love is great regardless of whether the feeling is returned. Mad Hu October 4, 2012 at 12:23 AM Thank you:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 26, 2012 at 8:33 AM wow a wonderful feeling in this piece Mad Hu..we all luv that "over the Moon" emotion .. hope u r having a super day luv.. Mad Hu July 26, 2012 at 9:17 PM thanks:)

Joann Grisetti May 18, 2012 at 11:19 AM Nice poem. Welcome to poetry soup.

Sirisha P May 14, 2012 at 2:27 AM i think u have reached moon inspired by this

Ravi Sathasivam May 7, 2012 at 1:30 AM Nice write. Well said. Tfs

David Williams May 7, 2012 at 1:19 AM Mad, great dedication..David