Crazy Banter.

Hail falls down on the sun,
Our race will not live, so help me God,
Where going to do the opposite of unloading a gun. 
We can only win by using force on this unhealthy pod.

Change the movie, even if hailed by critics,
Watch little Molly get killed by a chainsaw,
An absent scream in a scene of screeching crickets.
She we dead before i watched her brains fall.

Sadistic is nothing compared to this,
I the thought, i hate the sappy,
I like the thought of dumb souls slitting their wrists.
The actually screams make me happy.

I love the thought of readers i might startle,
I love the people who know I'm right,
My effort level is actually partial.
I love the people who laugh at life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 17, 2009 at 7:15 AM
LOL well if it helps I think I was tierd and Angry when I wrote this one, hence the typos
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August 17, 2009 at 7:06 AM
you are definitely out there in thought(or should i say allow your self to yell in the library without care) very great poem
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August 14, 2009 at 5:22 PM
Different. Sara
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