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Crazy

My whole life consists of games, yet I have no face. Kings and Queens get all the love, plus some guys named Ace. In the middle of the deck, just another guy. I’m a common number; it nearly makes me cry! Shuffled and reshuffled, I feel so unwanted, but there’s one occasion when I’m always flaunted. . . . Holding me, they wait their turn until finally, When no other card will do, happily they play me! Then they call me crazy, though. I can’t understand how I’m nuts if I am the best card in their hand! But it feels so good just to hear them say, “Crazy Eight” with so much glee,for I save the day. Guess I’ll have to be content with my crazy nickname, for at least at those few time, I can taste of fame. For Paula Swanson's Contest: "Pick a Card, Any Card"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/26/2014 4:22:00 PM
Andrea This is a cute and clever write. Full of imagination and craziness. AAAAWWW You will never be invisible to me and whoever else knows you. Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Arsenal poem.
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Date: 9/3/2012 10:17:00 AM
oh this is so good, this reader i'm sure will never tire of reading poetry written here, by my Queen of Hearts, or should that be Diamonds. awesome.
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Date: 6/26/2011 2:59:00 PM
Great game! LOL and such harmless fun. Light & Love
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Date: 6/8/2011 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's "Pick A Card"contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2011 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in the contest of Paula:)
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Date: 6/6/2011 1:51:00 PM
nice use of personification Andie! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 6/6/2011 1:37:00 PM
Now this is fabulous all my grandkids make me play this game I love it.Congrats on your 5th.place win and thanks for my congrats.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
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Date: 6/6/2011 12:04:00 PM
Congrats on your big win in paula's contest
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Date: 6/6/2011 10:08:00 AM
LOL, Many congrats on all your wins, Andrea : ) I'm in England, where Charley Horse is plain old cramp!
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Date: 6/6/2011 9:27:00 AM
You're quite a card, Andrea. Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/6/2011 8:36:00 AM
Hi Andrea....love this, and it reminds me of a game I haven't played in such a long time! (I believe, you wrote another poem for this contest earlier....I liked them both!!)
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Date: 6/6/2011 8:18:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your exciting win in Paula's contest with this unique write my friend.. u know I just luv this piece.. enjoy.. awesome as u ..luv.
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:39:00 AM
Like the way you wrote this poem Andrea. Good luck on the contest. love phyl
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Date: 5/29/2011 1:10:00 PM
Great angle here Carolyn, wishing you all the winning wishes with this!
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Date: 5/28/2011 9:52:00 AM
Wow.You are deff.gonna be the person to watch for.That is awesome you made yourself the card.And thanks for supporting my work.I know you will place high on the list!Kacey
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Date: 5/28/2011 4:31:00 AM
This is gonna be one heck of a showdown at the card table contest! Great hand your holdin' with this one!
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Date: 5/27/2011 3:54:00 PM
Love it Andrea Crazy eight may win the day! I think we tap into common source. the great unconcious unwashed horse, who blurts about with no recourse, provides the words to tickles force! :) xox Don
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Date: 5/27/2011 3:41:00 PM
WELL, I checked with the experts on the correct plurality of crazy 8 for your poem---according to the children of the RIX household who love to play cards--either way is correct! Funny that my kids are the experts in this debate. ha ha. Really do like this poem! Have a great weekend. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/27/2011 6:32:00 AM
Well done Andrea. great inspiration for this contest and well written as usual! Good luck in the contest
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Date: 5/26/2011 8:09:00 PM
Wouldn't have though about a poem from a deck of cards. It just goes to show, you can't hide talent. Charles
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Date: 5/26/2011 8:08:00 PM
just logged in Andrea so not sure if slow or not for me... will give it a try.. it is frustrating when u cannot get thru lists quickly to leave a comment.. maybe adminst. is working on the site.. let me see luv..
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Date: 5/26/2011 6:48:00 PM
Awesome job on this buddy! I hope you do great in the contest. Best of luck to you:)
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Date: 5/26/2011 6:06:00 PM
Very clever approach to the theme, Andrea
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Date: 5/26/2011 5:38:00 PM
Good luck in the contest - a good old twisting story. Mike
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Date: 5/26/2011 2:35:00 PM
This is top notch-Let me tell you why...it is a riddle poem ( I made that name up)..You start out with so much emotion and make the audience totally curious as to which card you are...you then toss around your emotions about feeling unwanted...then at the end, you recollect your thots again and decide it isn't so bad being crazy after all! A crazy 8! Make the word time at the end plural. :) Awesome one, Andrea. Gwendolen
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