Crazy

My whole life consists of games, yet I have no face.
Kings and Queens get all the love, plus some guys named Ace.

In the middle of the deck, just another guy.
I’m a common number; it nearly makes me cry!

Shuffled and reshuffled, I feel so unwanted,
but there’s one occasion when I’m always flaunted. . . .

Holding me, they wait their turn until finally,
When no other card will do, happily they play me!

Then they call me crazy, though. I can’t understand
how I’m nuts if I am the best card in their hand!

But it feels so good just to hear them say,
“Crazy Eight” with so much glee,for I save the day.

Guess I’ll have to be content with my crazy nickname,
for at least at those few time, I can taste of fame.

For Paula Swanson's Contest: "Pick a Card, Any Card"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Davis Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 4:22 PM
Andrea This is a cute and clever write. Full of imagination and craziness. AAAAWWW You will never be invisible to me and whoever else knows you. Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Arsenal poem.
Horsman Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 10:17 AM
oh this is so good, this reader i'm sure will never tire of reading poetry written here, by my Queen of Hearts, or should that be Diamonds. awesome.
Guzzi Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 2:59 PM
Great game! LOL and such harmless fun. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 10:48 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's "Pick A Card"contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 7:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in the contest of Paula:)
Guzzi Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 1:51 PM
nice use of personification Andie! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 1:37 PM
Now this is fabulous all my grandkids make me play this game I love it.Congrats on your 5th.place win and thanks for my congrats.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
Osita Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 12:04 PM
Congrats on your big win in paula's contest
Horne Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 10:08 AM
LOL, Many congrats on all your wins, Andrea : ) I'm in England, where Charley Horse is plain old cramp!
Devonshire Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 9:27 AM
You're quite a card, Andrea. Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest! Love, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 8:36 AM
Hi Andrea....love this, and it reminds me of a game I haven't played in such a long time! (I believe, you wrote another poem for this contest earlier....I liked them both!!)
Sweetheart Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 8:18 AM
Congrats Andrea on your exciting win in Paula's contest with this unique write my friend.. u know I just luv this piece.. enjoy.. awesome as u ..luv.
Babcock Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 7:39 AM
Like the way you wrote this poem Andrea. Good luck on the contest. love phyl
Maverick Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 1:10 PM
Great angle here Carolyn, wishing you all the winning wishes with this!
Greenlee Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 9:52 AM
Wow.You are deff.gonna be the person to watch for.That is awesome you made yourself the card.And thanks for supporting my work.I know you will place high on the list!Kacey
Mister Roboto Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 4:31 AM
This is gonna be one heck of a showdown at the card table contest! Great hand your holdin' with this one!
Johnson Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 3:54 PM
Love it Andrea Crazy eight may win the day! I think we tap into common source. the great unconcious unwashed horse, who blurts about with no recourse, provides the words to tickles force! :) xox Don
Song Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 3:41 PM
WELL, I checked with the experts on the correct plurality of crazy 8 for your poem---according to the children of the RIX household who love to play cards--either way is correct! Funny that my kids are the experts in this debate. ha ha. Really do like this poem! Have a great weekend. Gwendolen
Dufresne Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 6:32 AM
Well done Andrea. great inspiration for this contest and well written as usual! Good luck in the contest
Henderson Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 8:09 PM
Wouldn't have though about a poem from a deck of cards. It just goes to show, you can't hide talent. Charles
Sweetheart Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 8:08 PM
just logged in Andrea so not sure if slow or not for me... will give it a try.. it is frustrating when u cannot get thru lists quickly to leave a comment.. maybe adminst. is working on the site.. let me see luv..
Hunt Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 6:48 PM
Awesome job on this buddy! I hope you do great in the contest. Best of luck to you:)
Mehta Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 6:06 PM
Very clever approach to the theme, Andrea
Dailey Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 5:38 PM
Good luck in the contest - a good old twisting story. Mike
Song Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 2:35 PM
This is top notch-Let me tell you why...it is a riddle poem ( I made that name up)..You start out with so much emotion and make the audience totally curious as to which card you are...you then toss around your emotions about feeling unwanted...then at the end, you recollect your thots again and decide it isn't so bad being crazy after all! A crazy 8! Make the word time at the end plural. :) Awesome one, Andrea. Gwendolen
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