Get Your Premium Membership

Craziest Time In the Woods

As I was walking in the woods, admiring the beauty, I saw a brook that babbled nonstop, so incoherently, Humming as I strolled the summertime most fruitfully, I noticed gay purple hummingdirds, accompanying me! A meadow revealed yellow butterflies so aptly named, Swarming in the golden sunshine, wild and untamed, Enjoying their moment of bliss, before sunset flamed, Putting an end to the hour, that nature had acclaimed! Then I saw pretty ladybug, refined and full of grace, Dancing to enchanted breezes, in Queen Anne's lace. A sudden sound alarmed me, but it was only a rabbit, Running like the wind, as if it was customary habit! And when I turned my head to an emerald green tree, There sat a blue mockingbird, that was teasing me. The colorful day wore on, until long shadows finally- Which I became aware, were now shadowing me constantly! Written on August 11, 2020 For: Craziest Time at the Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/27/2020 8:31:00 PM
An enchanting walk in the woods shared with so much beautiful wildlife and natural wonders! Congrats on your win, well-deserved, my friend ~ John
Login to Reply
Buehler Avatar
Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/27/2020 8:47:00 PM
Thank you so much for your warm thoughts and congratulations, John. Blessings, my friend.
Date: 8/25/2020 5:37:00 PM
I don't know with it being a contest if you were held back by the number of lines you could write, Evelyn, but; I could have quite happily read on, and on . . . : )
Login to Reply
Buehler Avatar
Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/25/2020 8:10:00 PM
That makes me feel just wonderful, Indiana. I do write the long story poems once a week-always couplets. I'm glad you liked this one. Thank you so much. :)
Date: 8/20/2020 5:39:00 AM
Hello Evelyn Buehler, oh Mother nature is beautiful. Walking in the woods to listen to the birds sing. is a enjoyable sound. i hope all is well with you. Enjoy your day my friend.
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/20/2020 4:23:00 PM
Hello Evelyn Buehler, Yes i am doing well, thank you. I love nature to. I am glad you are doing well. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Buehler Avatar
Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/20/2020 9:02:00 AM
Hello Darlene, it's so nice to hear from you. I loved nature, even as a small child. It is indeed exquisite. I am doing quite well, as I hope you are. Thank you for the happy thoughts, and you have a wonderful day as well. :)
Date: 8/12/2020 7:42:00 PM
Lovely imagery!
Login to Reply
Buehler Avatar
Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/12/2020 10:01:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. :)
Date: 8/12/2020 8:36:00 AM
Evelyn, Lovely poem. I enjoy the few hours the forest shares; the sights and sounds. The best of creation found just before shade and shadows reclaim. -Richard
Login to Reply
Buehler Avatar
Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/12/2020 9:43:00 AM
Thank you so much, Richard. Your lovely comment means so much. Blessings. :)

Book: Shattered Sighs