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Craziest Time In a Dream

Craziest time in a dream that repeats itself. It starts of; I'm going off to war dress in heavy armor, riding on a magnificent black stallion. We wander through a dense forest, sunlight filtering through the leaves and cross a clear shallow river amid schools of salmon and trout. Groans from fatigue, we stop by a stream. I gather firewood and start a small fire. Pulling off my boots, my socks are tinged red from blisters bloody and raw from the shoes being too big. Night comes upon us and exhaustion takes over. Tired and hungry, shivering beneath my blanket I finally fall asleep, under the twinkling stars Hunger gnaws in my belly wakes me up. "Breakfast.", words echoes through my mind. 8/4/2020 Choice 2: Craziest Time In .......... 116words Craziest Time At The Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 8/7/2020 6:14:00 AM
If only the conscious knew what the subconscious carries with it, would certainly have justified such dreams dearest, Eve. Absolutely the right poem for such an entry. Good luck. Hugs xxx
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Date: 8/6/2020 3:27:00 PM
Eve Roper -- 'Warrior Woman!' Pretty crazy alright, I'll say! G.L. in Caren's contest! Cheers, gw
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Date: 8/6/2020 2:16:00 PM
Eve, I had the same repeating dream for years. Under hypnosis, I learned it was related to a past life. Not everyone believes in reincarnation, but it could explain such dreams. Best wishes in the contest!
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Date: 8/6/2020 9:14:00 AM
Blessed with both the real and dream worlds! The inner Selves and whims unleashed.. we grow and learn.. laugh and grieve.. swaying between being and doing in an adventurous spirit! Great entry, dear Eve! So delighted to read your poetry and touch your world! My warmest wishes. Best regards and blessings.
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Date: 8/5/2020 6:25:00 PM
Wow! You’re quite the dreamer!
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Date: 8/5/2020 12:07:00 PM
A fantastic dream which ends with breakfast ready and waiting for you! I'v had a few serious ones and they have come true. Perhaps in another poem. Blessings and hugs Eve, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/5/2020 7:07:00 AM
what an interesting dream Eve!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/5/2020 5:27:00 AM
Wow. Incredible dream. Not nearly so crazy as some I've had, my friend. Best to you in the contest. Much love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 8/5/2020 3:15:00 AM
One thing for sure we have some crazy dreams and when you wake you're well spooked. Good luck Tom
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