Crayons Revisited

We've been thinking how Crayolas come in a box Because we hear they've been compared to a lummox That's a funny thought, a mystery, and a flummox, But we know red is the most used because it rocks! Could be its gender-related that girls choose blue Boys opt for black. Do they have a somber view? Jenna always says, "Put it back when you're through." Milt presses too hard leaving them broken in two. Pink is not Milt's color. It's not his preferred hue. He prefers earthy tones, like brown and bamboo While Jenna seems to favor a deep shade of green, Like dew on mountain grasses, with a glossy sheen. We use orange for the sun. It's always plausible, but avoid using the purple, whenever possible. Milt doesn't have clothes in that shade of color, For a boxful of thirty-six, we'd trade for our cruller! Asking why boxes don't have the color bronze? Milt was told, “You're dumb as a box of crayons!” He looked at that guy like he didn't have a clue... Laughing, Jenna said, "He has a crayon’s IQ."
[a collaboration with Jenna Logan]
Written August 19, 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 7:58 PM
A crayon's IQ, eh? At least we guys have upped our game from the IQ of a rock! Enjoyed this collaboration, Milt. :) gw
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August 21, 2022 at 7:12 PM
I think so. I'm glad you enjoyed it, gw. We enjoyed writing it together.
Tor Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 6:31 PM
A very nice collaboration between you and Jenna. Enjoyed reading Milton and Jenna...
Hankins Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 7:12 PM
Thanks, Michael. It was a fun thing and we enjoyed it.
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August 20, 2022 at 9:29 AM
Excellent collaboration Milton and Jenna, I always found crayons infuriating, as well as fun, no matter how I tried always went outside the lines even beyond the page onto the table, I suppose somethings never change, black is great, but any hue will do, cheers David
Hankins Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 9:36 AM
Thanks a bunch, David. As a reward for your kindness, I may just send you a box of 96! Jenna and I did have fun.
Horsman Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 6:45 AM
Been to Jenna's now your one, Milt. truly love this, so different so entertaining to read, love the imagery.
Hankins Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 9:15 AM
Thanks, harry. We had a good time working on this one. I'm so glad you read it twice. Have a terrific weekend!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 12:18 AM
This is a lovely collaboration poem! I did one once and it was as horrible as pulling all my teeth out with a pair of rusty pliers. I am impressed with you two. What a darling poem!
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August 20, 2022 at 9:16 AM
Thanks so much, Caren. We had a good time doing it. I thought it worked rather well. It's challenging to find someone you can work effectively with. Thanks for filling me in on Carolyn's situation. Soup Mail.
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