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5/25/2025 for The Sonnet Poetry Contest sponsored by Miranda Hawley

Crayon Box Dreams

A box of crayons new and ready waits
to block the yelling sounds outside the door.
The dreams a hundred color box creates 
erase those sounds while I draw on the floor.

The shouting disappears, replaced by peace 
when I draw a new dress for my poor doll. 
Carefully, I choose a hue of cerise.
She'll feel so much better after her fall,

but I won't use dark red that makes me think
about dreadful unhappiness and fears, 
when my dad has had way too much to drink. 
I'm six and I have cried too many tears. 

It's all these colors that give life to dreams
that drown out all the scary shouts and screams.
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Kendrick Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 4:27 PM
Back to say, what a creative winner you have in this one. Way to go. Congratulations on your name being on the winners' list. Sara K
Crandall Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 7:00 PM
Thanks Sara!
Kendrick Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 4:18 AM
It is sad when I child has to endure those negative emotions because the adults in their life have addiction problems and need to seek help to over them. I say they need to grow up and be an adult. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Crandall Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 5:24 PM
Thanks Sara, agreed. Originally, I wanted this to be a positive poem, having the girl live out wonderful fantasies, but my mind took the emphasis way over to a drinking father and some kind of abuse in the family. Still, she's using the crayons for a respite. I felt empathy for her.
Wolf Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 8:50 PM
Ooh. Very intense, David. Red-red-rum, as Stephen King would have it. ~ gw
Crandall Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 5:21 PM
The Shining - great movie!
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