Craving Psychosis

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All I do is be set in some form of pandemonium. I'm sick of the same ripe, dull daily mind-numbing How will I be urged if I lose my equilibrium? Is life's symbiosis likely to be tedious scaling? Everything appears to me to be rendered nugatory. Similar to a grave where a covered body is decaying. With a driven heart, I have for you high expectancy. Since I induced the fantasies around your trembling. What's extra, I hear you moaning in the wings, enunciation, "I'm a long way from your stream; continue to scratch." My heart is for the domain of passion, its constitution. For what reason did you peruse it with a skewed outmarch. Eros won't permit his sprouts to be stifled cautiously. I opine he'll be revolted by your outrageous peculiarity. Written: September 3rd 2021

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/4/2021 6:07:00 AM

Brilliant write, Lasaad. You speak for many who may be going through travails of life. Emotions painted in superb vocabulary.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/4/2021 5:32:00 AM

There are periods in our lives that we feel like that or people around us feel so. Expertly written, my friend, Lasaad. Food for thought. Have a wonderful weekend!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/4/2021 4:50:00 AM

It's so easy to get stuck in a rut and we think is this it?, we have to find pastures new. Hope you have a lovely weekend Lasaad. Tom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/4/2021 1:29:00 AM

Great sonnet. It describes me perfectly. I feel too moody these days.