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my palate craves delicious double chocolate chuck cherry jubilee ice cream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/12/2009 7:43:00 AM
And now you have all the rest of us chocoholics craving it, too, Ed. Tantalizing poem. (Now where did I hide the chocolate?) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/11/2009 9:41:00 PM
Interesting haiku...about food-desire You are such a great poet, please keep writing...sharing your thoughts with us. Best wishes with your writings. Great you Ed ! Adeleke
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Date: 7/11/2009 6:03:00 PM
o.k. , now i have the munchies, yummy poem
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Date: 7/11/2009 4:41:00 PM
I'm a vanilla girl myself, Ed, but I can always be tempted ...
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Date: 7/11/2009 3:56:00 PM
Ice cream is my downfall..about 10# worth. Very nice poem..very filling. BG
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Date: 7/11/2009 3:56:00 PM
Sounds inviting. I don't believe that I have had that kind. I will have to try it. Great Haiku. Sara
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Date: 7/11/2009 3:37:00 PM
That's a craving I also have, delicious write...Raul
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