Craving

my palate craves delicious 
double chocolate chuck 
cherry jubilee ice cream

foodhaiku

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Carolyn Devonshire

July 12, 2009 at 7:43 AM

And now you have all the rest of us chocoholics craving it, too, Ed. Tantalizing poem. (Now where did I hide the chocolate?) Love, Carolyn

Adeleke Adeite

July 11, 2009 at 9:41 PM

Interesting haiku...about food-desire You are such a great poet, please keep writing...sharing your thoughts with us. Best wishes with your writings. Great you Ed ! Adeleke