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Crashing Waves

Angry, fierce water,
Nature’s surge, a tossing tide;
Crashing upon rocks.

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Joanna Smith

Date: 2/18/2010 11:22:00 AM

this is a great haiku! it has a kind of ......wild feel to it that i love reminds me of that movie where the surface of the water catches fire. and it was a very beautiful piece as well. a double ended spear! great write! =)Jo

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/9/2009 3:14:00 AM

Daniel, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

P Sheart

Date: 10/4/2009 1:37:00 PM

Amazing write, congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty

Date: 9/26/2009 4:57:00 PM

Daniel, just wanted to drop in and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/24/2009 1:13:00 PM

Congratulations on making it through the first round of the poetry competition! Luck and love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/24/2009 12:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Daniel. Love, Carol

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/4/2009 11:01:00 PM

Daniel congratulations on having your poetry featured this week - God Bless, MJ

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 8/4/2009 1:01:00 PM

Congrats Daniel on your haiku being featured. Vince

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/4/2009 9:57:00 AM

Love this one because it could be anything that I wanted it to be or just angry waves. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/3/2009 4:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being selected to be featured this week . Love, Carol

Date: 8/3/2009 12:59:00 PM

Nice use of imagery and personification. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

James Peranteau

Date: 8/3/2009 8:25:00 AM

Daniel,.. I clearly see and feel this Haiku !!! congrats on its feature this week !! james

James Fraser

Date: 8/3/2009 4:41:00 AM

Congratulations on being featured>>James

Justin Hensley

Date: 5/18/2009 1:45:00 PM

Love how this one makes me seemed to be right their when the tides hit the rock! Nice work!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/14/2009 7:11:00 PM

The reader can see and feel the intensity in your "Angry, fierce water." The sea is a tremendous source of inspiration for poets. You have painted your image very well in this excellent haiku! Love, Carolyn

Chris Goombi

Date: 4/3/2009 8:52:00 PM

Nice work, loved the imagery

Danielle Moreno

Date: 4/1/2009 6:05:00 PM

Good job Daniel you rock at writing haiku's.............Danielle

Arany P.

Date: 4/1/2009 10:51:00 AM

the image is so fierce! lovely haiku ~ Arany

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/1/2009 10:49:00 AM

"Angry, fierce water" the whole thing is nice, great job...Raul