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Crashing Waves

Angry, fierce water,
Nature’s surge, a tossing tide;
Crashing upon rocks.

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Joanna Smith

February 18, 2010 at 11:22 AM

this is a great haiku! it has a kind of ......wild feel to it that i love reminds me of that movie where the surface of the water catches fire. and it was a very beautiful piece as well. a double ended spear! great write! =)Jo

Raul Moreno

October 9, 2009 at 3:14 AM

Daniel, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

P Sheart

October 4, 2009 at 1:37 PM

Amazing write, congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty

September 26, 2009 at 4:57 PM

Daniel, just wanted to drop in and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

September 24, 2009 at 1:13 PM

Congratulations on making it through the first round of the poetry competition! Luck and love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 24, 2009 at 12:25 PM

Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Daniel. Love, Carol

Michael Jordan

August 4, 2009 at 11:01 PM

Daniel congratulations on having your poetry featured this week - God Bless, MJ

Vince Suzadail Jr.

August 4, 2009 at 1:01 PM

Congrats Daniel on your haiku being featured. Vince

Sara Kendrick

August 4, 2009 at 9:57 AM

Love this one because it could be anything that I wanted it to be or just angry waves. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 3, 2009 at 4:24 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being selected to be featured this week . Love, Carol

August 3, 2009 at 12:59 PM

Nice use of imagery and personification. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

James Peranteau

August 3, 2009 at 8:25 AM

Daniel,.. I clearly see and feel this Haiku !!! congrats on its feature this week !! james

James Fraser

August 3, 2009 at 4:41 AM

Congratulations on being featured>>James

Justin Hensley

May 18, 2009 at 1:45 PM

Love how this one makes me seemed to be right their when the tides hit the rock! Nice work!

Carolyn Devonshire

April 14, 2009 at 7:11 PM

The reader can see and feel the intensity in your "Angry, fierce water." The sea is a tremendous source of inspiration for poets. You have painted your image very well in this excellent haiku! Love, Carolyn