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Crashing In

I was enjoying A peaceful walk on a path When there was a noise Crashing in, piercing the scene A realm of fire penetrates Taking my walk down Hurting my tears as they fall Nothing of peace left Just tyranny fills the air My path annihilated Russell Sivey

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 7/5/2012 12:59:00 PM

Excellent form, and flow! Powerful imagery and language. Well done, Russell!! Best wishes, Keith

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 6/27/2012 5:53:00 AM

nice tankas. I love this genre, too

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2012 8:55:00 PM

Sounds like something shocking that happened, Russell. I like how you always imagine things happening, outside the box!

Jack Horne

Date: 6/25/2012 10:28:00 AM

wow, scary write, Russell

Tim B

Date: 6/24/2012 11:07:00 PM

Indeed, a surreal nightmare that came to pass on a warm and sunny day as we all enjoyed this peaceful walk. The clouds are full of noxious vapors, but there will always be another path, we just have to find it. Thanks for sharing, great poetry my friend!

Richard Palmer

Date: 6/24/2012 3:59:00 PM

turning back,need some peace and quiet,lol,great write Russell

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/24/2012 2:17:00 PM

Scary walk that you did take..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I don't want to go down that path..Thanks for stopping by..Sara