Crash in Mormon Country

I was driving a station wagon, Dad on my right
Mom, young kids, and dog in back seat
Construction ahead, a warning light
In my mind I keep the scene on repeat

I saw the truck in my rearview mirror
It was going fast, I was going slow
I couldn't accelerate as it got nearer
It climbed on our wagon, in Idaho.

It forced the rear of the car into asphalt
The rear doors sealed, but the dog did a vault
Mom lifted the kids over, seared her skin
Moved sideways and a flame shot up where she'd been.

We all made it out, and Mormons took us in
Kids made Mormon friends, and we regrouped
Took an airplane the rest of the way to the coast
Not a story of which I can boast.

Dad's summer teaching had to cover the cost
But we won something, not just lost
We found strength and friendship where we didn't expect
From people whose kindness I'll never forget.

Now every flashing warning light
Takes me back to that July.
A rearview mirror, one long breath,
The line between life and death.

Besides the Mormons, I also thank fate
Death has to come, but death had to wait.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 10:37 PM
Kim stopped and saw me this year traveling through Utah! I see she saw this poem of yours too
Springer Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 11:13 AM
Small world. Utah has some awesome scenery.
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 10:35 PM
Hey. This is so cool. I am/was a member but I stopped going because of doubts. I just never got my own testimony of the church ,so now I have been going to a non demoniational church in Utah. Mormons are Christians too, of course. My whole family is mostly Mormon and I know so many lovely LDS people. Looks like you met some really great ones. I love how you told this story.
Springer Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 3:34 AM
Thanks for the praise.
Smith  Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 5:47 AM
Sometimes we have to seek help in places unforeseen. I am glad the day didn't end in tragedy.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 4:34 AM
Great write! Fate brings friendships we’d never find. True story?
Rodrigues Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 5:43 AM
Wow…indeed, thank you for sharing.
Springer Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 11:37 AM
It is a true story.
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