Constance La France Poet Verse

Crash Death

Rolling waves crashed against the shore,
thunder was cracking in the sky,
and wild lightening flashed.
My heart is in pieces,
and in my mind I hear screaming,
as your car falls over a cliff.

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May 25, 2020

Poetry/Verse/Hexastich/Crash Death
Copyright Protected, ID 20-1254-794-03
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France


Written for the contest Hexastich It
sponsor, Nette OnClaud, Theme Chosen #3 Crash

Second Place

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Jan Allison May 30, 2020 at 12:37 PM love the twist at the end Constance:-) dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Aditi Mishra May 30, 2020 at 11:16 AM Your words are heartfelt Constance. Always reflecting the depths of your mind through sadness or joy. Congratulations on your win!

Nette Onclaud May 30, 2020 at 11:13 AM wow, this piercing, beautiful piece deserves a high win in my contest, constance...congrats and huggs

John Watt May 30, 2020 at 12:58 AM Great setup for the tragic ending. Well done, Constance, and congratulations on your win. Hugs ~ John

Jenish Somadas May 29, 2020 at 11:37 PM Wow..A long story behind the short verse..And a sudden twist in the image..Great win Constance..Congrats..

Kai Michael Neumann May 29, 2020 at 4:51 AM Ouch, that hurts ...

Jan Allison May 26, 2020 at 2:42 AM wow you nailed it Constance, I wasn't expecting that ending!:-) hugs Jan xx