Crash

tangled metal
entwined
like hate filled lovers
unnatural
unnessary
a radio plays
a rihanna song
disbeliving eyes
wish upon heavenly stars
forgive me Jesus
of my sins
this is not the way
it’s meant to be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 29, 2014 at 11:46 PM
Very deep pen Paul! Very sad poem dear friend! A 7 from me! I wish you a very Happy New Year! I hope that 2015 is very kind to you! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D."
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