Crash

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Crash is an oldschool rap song. It is the journey of how hard it si to make it in a rich vs poor system. 

The Crash

f minor


Crash the last 
It is so reprehensible
Jake the fake
Pass out the indispensable
Crash the last 
It is incomprehensible
Just to spot
The need to be sensible

Snake the fake
Speak out the justifiable 
Freak the geek
 The lost crucible


Our need to bleed
We deplete
Appear credible
A lie's 
Our truth
Understandably 
Regrettable

Bridge

Verse 2


The world is wearin you,
all the world is wearin you
Can't make the ends meet
All the world is wearin you
Can't find a place to eat
 all the world is wearin you
My life feels incomplete 
All the world is wearin you

But I'll work the system 
The best that I ever had
I'll love my struggle
pray I don't get too mad
Cause what's important
Sometimes makes me sad
I love this struggle
The way I always have


Bridge
(A minor)
We shall (3) be as one
We can't(3) be ignored

Floating down on the river
 Right now
Find   Peace
Like a leaf on the river on the river
 float down
find peace

Short solo to form

The need to race
Excell the pace 
to generate 
expel the truth
See the spoof
To venerate

Nash the stash
Forget the dispensable 
Stake the rent
You're now indefensible

Break the latch
Create a  suspendable
Fleece the state
Political agendica

Our need to bleed
We deplete
Appear credible
A lie's 
Our truth
Understandably 
Regrettable 

Bridge

Long solo

The poor
They seed
Big hope
Their incredible 

Drug laws
Bad schools
No jobs
It's horrible

So Jake the fake
Is now uncompensable
There's more poor
It is undeniable

Stake the lake
Has the sensational
He owns our dreams
Our lives destroyable

The rich
They need
Tax breaks
Yet their the creditable 
They lie
They steal
A dream 
That is 
Not Mendable

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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