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Crappiest Haiku

For Mo and Jeff


two birds on a wire
one pooped more than the other ~
droppings on the ground

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David Kavanagh

Date: 8/20/2023 3:48:00 AM

Pretty crappy Lin, but lots of fun when not on the receiving end, which I have been many times, what can one do but offer some back! Nicely done! Cheers David

Lin Lane
Date: 8/20/2023 3:55:00 AM

Morning, David. It seemed the likeliest of maneuvers at the time, yucky as it was. Thanks!

Paul Bell

Date: 8/20/2023 1:27:00 AM

I'm wondering what Mo and Jeff have been up to, and what they were doing on the wire. Best I can do, suffering a hangover. lol

Lin Lane
Date: 8/20/2023 3:54:00 AM

Reluctant were ya? lol

Paul Bell
Date: 8/20/2023 2:12:00 AM

Someone forced alcohol down my throat. lol

Lin Lane
Date: 8/20/2023 1:32:00 AM

Hi Paul. I’ll speak softly. Mo wrote one called Crappy and Jeff’s was called Crappier, sooo... mine had to be the Crappiest. But I’m wondering what you were up to that left you with a hangover. Hmmm