Crannies In Time

Crannies in Time 

Resting beneath a pile of silken scarves and soft kid gloves -
Hatboxes filled with old tweed caps, cuff links bearing long lost crests,  
A leather box – a jewelry case – opened to reveal a ballerina’s spinning grace, 
To release a mania of memories, popping up like popcorn, as if they waited
To jump out - surprise conspiring to astonish eyes of wonder; 
Travelers in time, arms of welcome pointing to a portal for hearts returning
With startled souls among the murals painted on their walls in time indelible,
Revisit wrinkles in eternity where moments recline - 
Retell events re-formed by memories cast in sterling,
Linked by silver circles showcasing milestones days, precocious pets,
Musicals with wishing wells, a lovers vow, frayed dancing shoes,
Milestone birthdays, skis for winter, umbrellas for a city clothed in rain, 
Side by side with souvenirs, states with nicknames stamped on their backsides
Collections, a crowded patch of rambling flowers scampering up a garden wall 
Poking through the tiny crannies left by minutes flying by in streamers flowing, 
Daylight merging into starlight - midnight gliding past each dawn -
Captivating charms guarding sacred spaces where treasures abide 
Now seen through cracks in time, amid the winds with hands of ice,
Hearts welcomed back to reflect in sanctuaries warm
With new eyes that once searched for ghosts of meaning –
Specters - understanding - come in focus.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 3/10/2020 7:58:00 AM
i love this one, wonderful writing with good alliteration, "mania of memories" is just one such memorable phrase..i think the poem would've benefitted from splitting into stanzas, so the lovely lines could be more easily savoured and absorbed (hope you don't mind me saying that) - congrats on your win!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/10/2020 2:07:00 PM
Hi Charlotte, thank you for your lovely comments and for your suggestion. I agree about splitting up the long phrases. I don't mind your feedback at all. Am so glad you liked this piece. Thank you.
Date: 3/9/2020 6:39:00 PM
Love the way you make words dance to your tune, Sam! Congrats!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/9/2020 10:22:00 PM
Hi LJ, I am always honored by your encouraging feedback so creatively done. Words are fun! I keep thinking about that "camera." Such an insightful observation. Thank you my friend!
Date: 3/9/2020 4:45:00 PM
Sam, so happy to see your charming charm bracelet memories earned you a win! Well-deserved, my friend. Hugs ~ John
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/9/2020 4:53:00 PM
Thanks John. Again, so glad to see your entry win as well!
Date: 3/6/2020 12:18:00 AM
So many things we come across open a vast store of memories, like when you hear an old song. Well written Sam, Over Fork Over. Tom
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/6/2020 12:32:00 AM
You are so right! As I mentioned to Andrea this poem was inspired by an old charm bracelet I had tucked away. I realized that I added charms that symbolized the treasured experiences of life - the ones I wanted to remember. Thank you! Over fork over. (I feel like I'm in the highlands!)
Date: 3/5/2020 8:39:00 PM
wow, you spun off into a very creative realm with your take on the theme, Sam. I don't even dare approach this contest. Very well done.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/5/2020 11:35:00 PM
Oh, Andrea, thank you so much. It was inspired by an old charm bracelet I found and by Craig's interpretation of the original verse to find new wisdom from the familiar. I so hope you will try your hand at this theme. It occurred to me that the charms we collect reflect our happiest memories!
Date: 3/5/2020 4:52:00 PM
Oh, how I love this one, Sam. "To release a mania of memories". "Revisit wrinkles in eternity where moments recline". So many great lines and so many cherished memories. Great write, friend - a fav for me! ~ John
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/6/2020 11:10:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend. I loved this theme and spent a lot of time thinking about how to express its wisdom. I am so glad you liked it.
Date: 3/5/2020 4:33:00 PM
Awesome details paint the scene of times past--great poetry, Sam.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/5/2020 11:22:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. I am so appreciative of your words - your encouragement.
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