Crane

beak wedged in white noise twigs of legs snow-plant plumage in the air body borne invisible muse contemplates wholesome bird

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/1/2025 12:08:00 PM

I enjoyed reading about your "Crane" write. A funny looking bird. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful day writing away..........

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2025 2:27:00 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/30/2025 8:14:00 PM

Always enjoy your tankas, Kim. (Hadn't seen one for a while). Thanks, gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2025 2:27:00 PM

I used to write many! I was inspired!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/30/2025 5:12:00 AM

- Crane an elegant bird, Kim :) - Great written :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2025 5:15:00 AM

Thank you! I appreciate you, Anne-Lise!

Maria Williams

Date: 4/30/2025 4:04:00 AM

Dear Kim,your Tanka gave me a quiet pause—like I was watching a bird vanish mid-flight, both delicate and mysterious. The last line felt like it was speaking directly to my own sense of wonder...Hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2025 5:03:00 AM

Thank you so much, Maria! :) Hugs

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 4/30/2025 12:30:00 AM

The bird an elusive part of the vast natural world.Its beauty very nicely captured.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2025 5:03:00 AM

Thank you, my friend!

Paige Hind

Date: 4/29/2025 9:20:00 PM

Wow, we both are writing about birds! I have to say, I wrote mine before even looking at yours!! I love the first line, "muse" too, "white noise" very deep and this took some thought, <3

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2025 5:04:00 AM

Thank you, Paige! Will have to check on yours :)

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 4/29/2025 2:21:00 PM

Nice tanka Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2025 5:11:00 AM

Thank you, Oliver,

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2025 5:04:00 AM

Thank you, Oliver,