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At seventy-plus, my noggin is a barren landscape, that once grew a prized crop of chestnut hair. And yet some scattered strands of grey, still, sprout here and there above a fussy hedge; edging a closely cropped terrain. Proceed further down, and you'll see a weathered forehead with long furrows running in horizontal worry lines. Keep descending, and you'll discover two bushy brows resembling wiry bristles in disarray. Below them, you'll find two slightly out-of-focus eyes, two brown orbs afloat in a sea of white. Peer into those eyes, past their reflective sheen, and you may even glimpse my soul. Following its sloping curvature, you will come across a rugged, slightly broken schnoz of a nose; jutting out between two wrinkled, worn cheeks. Continuing down, you'll discover a pair of pink crinkled lips, wearing a smug, satisfied smile. Next, you'll observe an unshaven pincushion chin dappled with stumps of yesterday's stubble. Now, step back, and as those features I mentioned above take shape in your thoughts; let your imagination craft my image in your mind.

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Date: 12/5/2019 5:30:00 PM
Hi Emile I enjoyed this. You did well. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 12/6/2019 9:50:00 AM
Thanks Gregory, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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