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Cradle Moon

Cradle me in darkness, before my flight. Relaxing let me live my dream so true. Again, I entreat you to set my desires free. Delight my senses set my vision in truth. Laugh not at wishes; they are my design. Earthborn from the Angels delivered here. My existence a falsehood for way to long, Only you can bring my caprice to reality. One soul delivered from a torment I live. Now cradle moon bring peace to your child.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/2/2009 5:59:00 PM
Cecil, this is so beautiful! I hope the "cradle moon" has brought you peace. It always inspires wonder in me, that's for sure. Love to you, Carolyn
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Date: 3/2/2009 5:43:00 PM
A wonderful acrostic...even if the form wasn't skillful (which it is!!)....it is a beautiful poem all by itself! ~ Carrie
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Date: 3/2/2009 4:56:00 AM
A deeply revealing and touching piece. A heartfelt plea from deep within your soul. Such a magnificent poem, it is hard to even tell it is an Acrostic. May your hopes and dreams be fulfilled. I'm so moved by this beautiful poem. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/1/2009 11:59:00 PM
Beautiful work.Very creative Cecil.Rgds Brian & thanks for yourb welcome comments
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Date: 3/1/2009 8:44:00 PM
This is amazing. A poem written straight from the soul. It is truly magical. You have a way with words. I really enjoyed this it would make a great meditation piece. Smiles from Lolita
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