Cracks in the water

are in the subjective eyes
of lonely-hearted
women like me
whom identify the imperfections
of pollen-coated surfaces
where the still water lies
before June
has made it too hot 
for thought and reflection


I can clearly see the ripples,
the wrinkled clarity
where ducks
and water birds
disturb the calm
of a perfect surface
for their babies 

mighty splashings

I see the remnants of yesterday
peeking through 
and the remains of myself 
I will try for tomorrow  

recycle hope 
and I won't cut my hair
when it outgrows its time
because I love the history


these are the keepers
the dead bits 
of myself

Requiem in D Minor 
is playing
and I am listening
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 8, 2026 at 2:40 PM
I enjoyed your write! I liked verse 4 and the final verse the most. Hugs
Bloom Avatar
May 8, 2026 at 3:25 PM
Thank you so much ??????
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