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Cracks In the Sky

Cracks In The sky. . The dark forbidding ominous sky Can no longer retain and hold back The tears held within depths of it’s shroud And begins to crack . Darkness consumes the ravaged soul And seeps continuous from every pore Neither will bewildered spirit No longer endure True love is the salve that heals all wounds Without it Wounds fester remain open and painfully sore . The hideous preying reaper hides Within the obscuring shadows and waits The kiss of death The release and deemed my fate So I may not dwell in darkness and limbo no more A welcomed liberating kiss To end my excruciating pain Succumbing to nothingness No more cracks in my sky Or floods of rain. . Peter Dome©2020.

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Date: 12/16/2020 11:40:00 AM
Hello peter, Dome, your wound will heal in time. Love does heal. It is searching for the right person to share your life with. Merry Christmas. enjoy your day my friend. x
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/17/2020 10:18:00 AM
Please put your comment back to the poem A Coin Found. I presssed the wrong sign. Thank you my friend.
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Peter Dome
Date: 12/16/2020 4:07:00 PM
Thank you Darlene. i always appreciate you stopping by. hope you are well. Hope she comes along soon. take care. Pete.
Date: 12/15/2020 4:41:00 AM
WoW! Peter, What a powerful write about one finding their true love. I agree; love can heal a wounded heart. Well done, my friend. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Alexis Y.
Date: 12/15/2020 4:37:00 PM
I am well my friend. Thank you so much for asking;-) Alexis
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Peter Dome
Date: 12/15/2020 11:12:00 AM
Hi Alexis. how are you.Yes love can heal,, it can also wound as I know well. take care my friend. thank you. have a great day.
Date: 12/15/2020 4:03:00 AM
- "True love is the salve that heals all wounds" ... so true, Peter :) - A great poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Peter Dome
Date: 12/15/2020 11:08:00 AM
Hi Ann Lise. Hope you are well my friend. Just need to get the salve.take care. Thank you.
Date: 12/15/2020 3:11:00 AM
J O Y comes in the morning.. a rich and vibrant work. God bless you dear friend
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Peter Dome
Date: 12/15/2020 11:06:00 AM
Thank you Regina you are most kind fear Lady. hope you are well. take care.

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