Cracking the Quiet Space

cracking the quiet space, toddler with seeds
   feeds ostrich through car’s window,
giggles with jocund joy

8/20/2022

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Date: 8/22/2022 5:02:00 AM
It must have been a very interesting sight. A toddler feeding an ostrich... that too through a car's window. The toddlers are quite smart these days.....! Sweet little poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/22/2022 6:10:00 AM
A cute video! Thanks.
Date: 8/22/2022 4:24:00 AM
I can see the scene. Aren't children a delight and add so much to our lives. I know it was a joy for you to see this. Thank you for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/22/2022 6:10:00 AM
You can’t help smiling…big! Kids are great!
Date: 8/20/2022 10:37:00 PM
Have you been on a safari? Lovely poem. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2022 10:07:00 AM
Watched a cute youtube video of a little boy on safari…probably a park.
Date: 8/20/2022 7:40:00 PM
Feeding ostriches?! through the car window?! Is your car bewitched?! lol. Enjoyed, gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2022 10:07:00 AM
Don’t ostrich-size the poem ;)
Date: 8/20/2022 3:24:00 PM
Kim, You described such an adorable scene in a few words. Well done. Enjoy your weekend:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2022 5:39:00 PM
Thank you! From a youtube video I saw. Happy Weekend!
Date: 8/20/2022 12:52:00 PM
... joy and happiness :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2022 12:55:00 PM
Thanks ~ Kim ((hugs))
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