Cracking the Quiet Space

cracking the quiet space, toddler with seeds
   feeds ostrich through car’s window,
giggles with jocund joy

8/20/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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George Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 5:02 AM
It must have been a very interesting sight. A toddler feeding an ostrich... that too through a car's window. The toddlers are quite smart these days.....! Sweet little poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 6:10 AM
A cute video! Thanks.
Kendrick Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 4:24 AM
I can see the scene. Aren't children a delight and add so much to our lives. I know it was a joy for you to see this. Thank you for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 6:10 AM
You can’t help smiling…big! Kids are great!
Buhagiar Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 10:37 PM
Have you been on a safari? Lovely poem. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 10:07 AM
Watched a cute youtube video of a little boy on safari…probably a park.
Wolf Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 7:40 PM
Feeding ostriches?! through the car window?! Is your car bewitched?! lol. Enjoyed, gw
Rodrigues Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 10:07 AM
Don’t ostrich-size the poem ;)
Y. Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 3:24 PM
Kim, You described such an adorable scene in a few words. Well done. Enjoy your weekend:-) Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 5:39 PM
Thank you! From a youtube video I saw. Happy Weekend!
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 12:52 PM
... joy and happiness :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 12:55 PM
Thanks ~ Kim ((hugs))
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