Cracking Eggs

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crackin' eggs into clean glass mixing bowl, beating.... clear albumen drips housewife observes scene as light reflects on egg whites.... senryu in there?

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 2/20/2019 7:02:00 AM

I read it three times. You rock!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/20/2019 1:16:00 PM

Abdullah, Thanks for dropping by and reading my poem three times. I appreciate you dropping by. Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 1/29/2019 3:08:00 PM

ha ha, loved this - I see I'm not the only one who thinks about writing while doing boring jobs!!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/30/2019 9:54:00 AM

Jack, Just a reoccurring idea running through my head which happens in all kinds of situations. I guess I am hooked on writing poems. LOL.. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/29/2019 4:17:00 AM

Amazing where, poets imagination takes them, love this Sara..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/28/2019 2:10:00 PM

- A skilled housewife manages it perfectly, Sara :) - Great one :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/28/2019 4:44:00 PM

Sunshine, I have had reoccurring thoughts about this scenario with the egg whites and the light reflecting off those egg whites on the side of the bowl. I keep thinking that there is a Haiku or a Senryu in that scene. LOL.. Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara