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Cracked Vase- Mcwhirtle

A broken heart
Is like a cracked vase
Affection can't stay
Love left without a trace

Hurt runs deep
It needs healing & space
But true love prevails!
So powerful, you embrace



Inspired by the  McWhirtle contest
Sponsor: Charles Messina

11/15/19

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Jan Allison

December 26, 2019 at 1:56 PM

such a true poem Alexis, Many congratulations on your win, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina

December 24, 2019 at 9:29 AM

I really like this poem, Alexis. Well written and wonderfully expressed. Congratulations on your win. Happy Holidays.. Charlie

Alexis Y.

December 24, 2019 at 10:23 AM

Hi Charles, You hosted a good contest. I appreciate my placement. It like an early Christmas present. Happy Holidays to you too:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

November 17, 2019 at 1:46 PM

Nicely done for the contest, Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 17, 2019 at 3:04 AM

Outstanding poem full of meaning and deep knowledge of heart's ways dearest, Alexis!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

November 16, 2019 at 2:05 AM

A gorgeous poem, Alexis! Beautifully expressed ... each line spills such ink tenderness. Pure pulse poetry! A golden goodie fave. Love and more love always.

Regina Mcintosh

November 15, 2019 at 11:24 PM

A wonderful entry. It will do great I'm sure. God bless you dear friend. Love, Gina

Alexis Y.

November 16, 2019 at 8:36 AM

Hi Regina, Thanks for such a nice and encouraging comment. Have a great weekend my friend:-) Alexis

Winged Warrior

November 15, 2019 at 9:23 AM

Excellent! my sister from another mister...Hi Alex...how are you, sweetie...brother dear is near lol...love ya babe...^WW^ :o)

Alexis Y.

November 16, 2019 at 8:41 AM

Hey Bro, If I could give an award for comment of the day. You would get it hands down! You are such a bright light on the soup. I am so we are apart of the "soup" at the same. You make "soup" experience amazing. PS, You are so funny too. They say laughter is the best medicine . Thanks for giving me my medicine to. Have a fantastic weekend bro:-) Alexis