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Cracked Souls

Quote"A true friend is someone who thinks that you are a good egg even though he knows that you are slightly cracked". Bernard Meltzer


Her gaze was distorted beyond recall.
Looking at me twice and venerating all.
The two of us in tandem fascinate me.
Whose life was broken, many days to glee?

Light travels through cracks in the glass,
Amidst shards of her, thrown on the grass.
Using golden glue to restore crank pottery,
Rules used to foster mayhem and slobbery

The girl in the crystal appears to be broken,
Sharp wounds full of light and left unspoken.
Once she reaches fullness, she is complete,
Even if it fit her head, wouldn't cover her feet.

Light breeze in when spirits burst woven,
Aspires for dark healing, sets heart in motion.
When we sieve to embrace light and love,
Let the blissful benison of God deign from above.

Written: March 05, 2023

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Valsa George March 9, 2023 at 8:33 AM Lovely line of thoughts !"When we sieve to embrace light and love, Let the blissful benison of God deign from above." Great lines. Altogether a wonderful poem. All the Best dear friend

Victor Buhagiar March 6, 2023 at 1:50 AM Lovely poem, and much food for thought.

Joanna Daniel March 6, 2023 at 1:49 AM Very creative, Sotto:)

Anisha Dutta March 5, 2023 at 11:00 PM Excellent approach. Sure to win the contest. All the best

Sara Kendrick March 5, 2023 at 1:28 PM Creative and expressive lines in this contest entry. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for your visits to my page. Sara