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Cracked But Not Broken

When the morning light,squeaks through the vanes; of wooden casements and windowpanes. When eyes glued shut,from night time fears, are opened wanly to mornings clear. That’s when in the corners of my mind, thoughts of you rush forth to find; Soft smiles, open arms and a warm heart, You know I’ve loved you from the start.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/24/2011 12:59:00 PM
Hello D.G. again... ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!! on your poem being featured this week, hope your enjoying your Easter Sunday. Take care and have a nice one,..p.d
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Date: 4/24/2011 11:20:00 AM
A wonderful piece as always Debbi many congrats on your feature this week Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/24/2011 8:07:00 AM
featured..... because it is lovely...reminds me of Alan Bergman's WINMILLS OF YOUR MIND .....best of luck in the poetry soup comp Deb
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Date: 4/20/2011 9:17:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a great piece to share with us all my friend with luv.. Happy Easter luv..
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Date: 4/19/2011 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2011 3:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Debbie, with this beautiful couplet of love for mankind from your big heart. XOXOX Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 4/18/2011 1:45:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week on Soup, Deb! Beautiful writing. Love, Annalise
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:51:00 PM
Congratulaons on your poem being featured this week, Debbie
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Date: 4/18/2011 5:25:00 AM
Congrats on this selection. Yep! If one can look on that mate lying in bed with rumpled hair and horrible breath, then it's gotsabe love. Not putting this one down. I've been married 60 years and I can look on with love. Super write! Love, daver
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Date: 2/21/2009 5:21:00 PM
What a sweet, sentimental wrirte this is, Debbie! Love the warm images here. Love ya, Me!
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Date: 12/18/2008 3:42:00 PM
A beautiful piece.....Best wishes, Sara
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Date: 12/4/2008 8:45:00 PM
I love this! It starts with a warm feeling, then ends with a lovely hope! Nicely done! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/4/2008 6:58:00 PM
A breathe of fresh air. Nicely written. Vince
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Date: 12/4/2008 4:28:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this beaut! It sounds like love is in the air.
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