Cracked

They said he'd cracked,
like a jar in the wind,
ajar to within.

Grumbling gears in an attic of a mind,
cranked with the resiliency of an old steam engine,
chugging along.

Muddy cigar for the failures,
basement couch for the come-backs,
after being knocked off a hundred times,
the podium has never had this many scratches,
climbs back up every time,
but gallows are never very accommodating.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Tesla Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 5:49 PM
I appriciate it Laura and Carol, thanks! I honestly didnt consider this a good quality piece but you guys renowed my faith :)
Mckenzie Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 11:52 AM
Shahroz I really enjoyed this featured poem congratulations! Laura :)
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September 6, 2011 at 12:08 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Shahroz. Love, Carol
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