Crack (The Story of Donald)

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quarter to six
listen to some Styx 
and play the bass

jumping up and down 
always messing around 
nothing better too do

tripped over the amp, 
bass guitar, and a ramp
fell out the window.

cracked open his head 
better left unsaid 
sorry for your loss.

now up in the sky 
hanging with Ron, John and the big Guy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Loving Iii Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 4:10 PM
sounds intresting. as well as with personal touches. john
Kendrick Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 2:58 PM
Sounds like a fun night gone arye. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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