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Crack the Coconut

Monkey loves to crack the coconut, crack de coconut wide open wide Monkey loves to drink from the coconut cup, all de milky white delicious juice inside Sister monkey see what brother monkey do, she grabs a big rock, and smashes a coconut too She likes to drink de coconut juice as well, so she climbs back up the coconut tree and grabs two more ... but coming down, one fell Aw, so sad Brother monkey says, too bad He grabs the fallen coconut and cracks the shell, crack de shell wide open real fast Then shares it with his sister like always in the past At night, they play their coconut congas, make de lively jungle sound Two monkeys in a coconut tree, having fun tossing the coconuts around

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Date: 1/17/2017 10:01:00 AM
As I am reading your poetry I can see this action in front of me happening. This is a fun write I enjoyed it.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/17/2017 10:25:00 AM
Ty, Darlene. One of my personal fun fave poems. Glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate you stopping by and taking a brief rest. Love and peace.
Date: 12/7/2016 5:47:00 AM
Fun read, all I kept thinking was put the lime in de coconut. Now I want a margarita. :)
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/17/2017 10:20:00 AM
Ty, Paloma. Ah, yes ... de lime in de coconut goes well indeed. Ha ha ha. Glad you had a bit of fun reading it. Appreciate your visits always. Love and peace to you.
Date: 12/4/2016 8:24:00 AM
- A pleasure to read, Freddie :)) - <3 & hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/17/2017 10:18:00 AM
Ty, Anne-Lise. A tip of the coconut cup to you. Love your warm support. Love and joy to you.
Date: 12/3/2016 5:28:00 PM
Lol! Freddie, This is such a fun write. The imagery fantastic. I can just picture it all in my mind. Well done:-) Alexis
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/17/2017 10:15:00 AM
Ty, Alexis. Happy to put a pretty picture in your lovely mind. Had a blast writing it too. Reading your loving words of supports makes me so happy. Love and peace to you.
Date: 12/3/2016 2:50:00 PM
Wow Freddie! Fun one :)
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/17/2017 10:12:00 AM
Ty, Heidi. Just playing around w/words can be such fun, eh. Glad to hear your kind words of supports always. Love and peace to you.

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