Crack

I stand among wasted existence Endless images stare, I shiver, reflections glare Perpetual nightmare, My Ebony skin cracks the mirrors

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Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 3/7/2021 9:44:00 PM

In dark!

Gayle Rodd

Date: 3/7/2021 5:32:00 PM

Oooh this is profound and the last line drives it home!

Debbie Walker
Date: 3/19/2021 7:20:00 PM

Thank you so much

John Fleming

Date: 1/2/2017 4:16:00 PM

Rather sinister...But even so - compelling all the same! Makes one sit up and take notice - Very cleverly done! My best wishes for your New Year, Debbie...And my regards. :) john P.s A much deserved 7.

Debbie Walker
Date: 1/24/2017 11:04:00 AM

Thank you John, I greatly appreciate your comment. You never really know how someone else sees your work unless they post it. Thanks again