Coyote Full of Secrets Deep and Dark Pt4

Her sharp nail cut away the muscle from the bone
Each tormented scream of his was heard by her and him alone
He panted between screams and shouted, “Do you know who your father is?”
“It was the medicine man and I’m his son, you brother, please”

“I… know,” she whispered, “Now catch your breath, I want you alert,”
“Because this is where things are going to really hurt.”
The pain he felt from the boiling water sent him into a blackness so thick
A blackness he could feel against his skin that made him sick

At least the pain was gone, he thought he was dead
Until he heard her voice echo in his head
"Come back, come back to reality," it said

He heard whimpering and cries
From the demons cowering with “I’m glad it’s you,” teary fire red eyes
Just before, he was dragged back to consciousness
That moment he would dell on as a painless heavenly bliss

His nose was filled with the stench of his own flesh
He threw up at the sight of his bloody chest 
The excruciating pain reminded him of reality afresh

This time he lay there, he was not alone 
There were a thousand of his tormented tribesmen and she was sitting on a throne
Next to her was an eagle and a bear riddled with maggots to the bone
They were in the land of the gods, a hell he would call his new home

The village lies desolate, a village that once thrived full cheer
It took one little mistake which imprisoned with fear
And one by one they began to disappear 

This is the story I was told by a man
Who hides in the town begging for food, when ever he can
I don’t know where he goes or where he has been
But since last month he disappeard… never to be seen

** Sorry P.D I didn't know how to end it but there is your Coyote**

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/15/2011 8:45:00 PM
lol.. it was a fox.. but your coyote.. story was way to cool,,, thanks a lot.. don't worry about the ending.. it was all perfect.. and you did it all for me,, thanks.. have a nice one.. and say hi to your baby and wife... from the coyote...lol... p.d.
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