Cows

cows
graze..
surrounded by fog

naturehaiku

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Donna Jones

November 21, 2014 at 6:31 PM

I too see this scene often out my front window...nicely done Sarah....

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

November 19, 2014 at 6:01 AM

I can visualize the hazy figures...wow great haiku Sara . Love. Take care XXXX RAJAT

Andrea Dietrich

November 18, 2014 at 11:05 PM

I bet cow tipping is even funner on a day like that!! (not that I ever took part in that mean activity!!) I like how you just did a simple picture of what you must have seen this day.

Scott Thirtyseven

November 15, 2014 at 8:33 PM

Love it, can see it vividly. Though I assume that cows graze through out nearly anything.

Monterey Sirak

November 14, 2014 at 10:01 AM

Beautiful. I have seen this scene many times in the early morning.

Ken Carroll

November 12, 2014 at 11:33 PM

Wonderful outdoor imagery Sara!

Nette Onclaud

November 12, 2014 at 12:32 PM

beautiful scene, sara.. huggs

Barbara Gorelick

November 12, 2014 at 7:27 AM

I've seen this many times on the way to the coast..lots of dairy farms in that area. It is a lovely sight. Enjoyed my dear. BG

Ravi Sathasivam

November 12, 2014 at 2:10 AM

Excellent. Nice haiku. Enjoyed. Tfs

Carrie Richards

November 11, 2014 at 8:02 PM

I can see it......and it makes me pull a sweater over my shoulders ! Love this little poem!

David Meade

November 11, 2014 at 4:38 PM

I like the simplicity -- it allows me to fill in the canvas -- black and white Holsteins , steam rising off the backs, hot breath . . . or maybe Jerseys brown with soft eyes . . . thank-you for the frame to paint in.