Cowboys In the Rain

Cowboys are dancing in a kaleidoscope of colored shirts, faces hidden beneath shadows of hats, the silver bands catching flecks of light like raindrops on an umbrella, feet and legs blurring in a two-step, blending like colors awash in a storm. In the round they move, like water rippling to the edges of a pool, the colors splashing into one another until all that is left is the murky outline of a circle and the cleanly-washed gleam of the floorboards. 2nd Place Early August Premier Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand 8/1/17
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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 1:08 PM
Hello Dale, I have enjoyed reading this poem. I just can picture these cowboys dancing in the rain. have a nice day my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 6:49 PM
So lovely, Dale!! Congrats!
Cozart Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 7:50 PM
Thanks, Kim!
Krampe Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 3:16 PM
What a unique subject for a poem! Vivid description - congrats on your win.
Cozart Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 3:41 PM
Thanks, Agnes, and congrats on your win, too!
Ashley Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 3:03 PM
Hi Dale, felt like I was there kickin up heels! Great write. Congratulations on your win :)
Cozart Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 3:40 PM
When I've been I've especially loved the line dances, or at least the one I know how to do.
Green Avatar
June 8, 2017 at 4:58 PM
Very cool, nice depiction of a dance hall on a Saturday night. Toss in a few hub cap sized belt buckles and let the dancing begin.
Cozart Avatar
June 8, 2017 at 5:03 PM
Those buckles are pretty big, aren't they?
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