Cowboys

Beneath dotted stars with soft campfire as ally, lone cowboy’s pondering meanders through the sand dunes and night-saloons thumb marked by his blazed rides for pistol quests and fist thugs, as rowdy duels and women’s sighs so adored climb unto a red of greeting sunset. Recalling those dusty trails--pungent and bold-- he descends like a magic bat from nowhere riddling his foes way down the desert floor. Many at times, the sawdust boots reeked from the heat of bandits’ glare as if to pierce his chest one hell of a shot with tassels flowing high unto smoky air. Edifying as he seems, beneath dotted stars, a lone cowboy is simply this: a tender wind mild as his strumming guitar calling for prairies’ honeyed life while a tough leather vest hides his simple, warm nobleness. Howdy Pard Contest of Shadow Hamilton 5/5/2014
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Devonshire Avatar
May 10, 2014 at 1:24 PM
Nicely done, Nette. Congrats on your win!
Dietrich Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 10:11 PM
way to go, COWGIRL. I can see congrats for you and will have to check later and see what number you placed. Hope it was high. you deserved it.
Parker Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 3:10 PM
congratulations on your win Nette
Hunter Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 12:47 PM
Outstanding write, Nette. I see you won with it? Its very deserving, no doubt. Thre are so many great lines...all of them!...and your ending is perfection...muah!
A. Sharma Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 12:00 PM
Wonderful write Nette ! Congrats on ur great win !
Callus Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 9:47 AM
Hi Nette! You never let your guard down...even a contest with this type of theme still gets your mind working in top gear:) much enjoyed; congrats. // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 9:20 AM
Congratulations on a fine win.
A   Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 8:59 AM
Nette,' Congratulations, enjoying every poem on Shadow's " Howdy Pard" winning list... XOX~ LINDA
Lee Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 8:56 AM
Wonderful Write, Nette! Congratulations on your win! :)
Torres Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 8:08 AM
Congratulations on your win, nette!!! :O))
Hamilton Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 8:08 AM
great read and poem Nette congrats on win ty for entering hugs
Mehta Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 7:54 AM
Congratulation on a fine win on the cowboy theme, nette
Watson Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 7:38 AM
Just beautiful as always , Every poem is better than the last and the last was fantastic .
Dylan Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 3:35 PM
WHAT A FUN READ... the imagery is great... I love it... good luck in the contest Brooke
Sirak Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 6:28 AM
A perfect ending for a wonderful poem. I can picture the scene so well, I almost want to sneeze from the smell of the sawdust.
Ponce Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 10:49 PM
Yo, cowgrrrl! I really felt the Wild West that! I can totally hear this as the accompanying song of one of my favorite video game series, Wild ARMs.
Dunn Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 9:32 PM
Cow girl i love this poem and the ending is right on target, yee haw, I can feel the hot wind of the desert and hear the cow hands singing to the cattle, thanks for taking me back to the old west, lol simply put great job here, it reminds me of home, also thanks for your cool review of my work also it means alot when i get a great comment like yours, have a peaceful night, cheri
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 5:47 PM
this ends up a very tender poem about the cowboy and his simple heart. Very nicely done, Nette. I enjoyed reading this one.
Smith Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 1:35 PM
I love your take on the cowboy nette...You electrify the cowboy life..hugs Tim p.s. saloon not salon
Mara Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 12:13 PM
You lead me down the path of adventure and then tenderness. Great piece of poetry, Nette. Thank you for choosing my work in your contest.
Kendrick Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 12:00 PM
Ahh!! calling for prairies’ honeyed life while a tough leather vest hides his simple, warm nobleness. Enjoyed reading this contest entry..Way to go ..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit..Haven't heard from you in awhile..Sara
Lalion Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 10:52 AM
I can see every moment of this in my mind. A very deep and sensitive poem, Nette
Paras Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 10:48 AM
Well, a most delightful poem about a real cowboy. He may appear tough but his heart is gentle, rightly so. A pleasure to read you today!
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