Cowboy

Often times I dream of days gone past -
Although, I've not lived then -
Neither saddle or horse shoe cast:

Where was he when I first envisioned the outline of his long, hatted figure?
Atop a horse named, "Fourth of July" -
Montana perhaps or Wyoming is where he lingered...for a time.

Long since dormant, there remains only tattered 
images of a dusty saddle horn, bent buckles, a frayed lasso hidden under
some felled and hollowed out oak, that still rustles with callused sounding 
boots of cowboys retiring, still wet with the days cattle drive, sore and
worn out talks of how they could have been with the perfumed, bustled 
women of their otherwise, ordinary youth.

5/7/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Devonshire Avatar
May 10, 2014 at 1:10 PM
Bravo, Lisa! This is one of the best I've read in the contest. I absolutely love your writing style, especially the vivid and creative imagery you create in the last verse. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
Lee Avatar
May 10, 2014 at 1:38 PM
Thanks so much for the very nice comments, Carolyn!
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2014 at 11:41 PM
this sure provides some good images of that old west. Congrats for your fine win.
Lee Avatar
May 10, 2014 at 11:12 AM
Andrea, thank you! You're a sweetheart! :)
Parker Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 3:13 PM
congratulations on your win
Lee Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 3:51 PM
So very appreciated, Frederic!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 2:47 PM
Vivid imagery :) wow!! Nice one :) Congratulations on the win ..:) olive eloisa :)
Lee Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 3:50 PM
Thanks so much, Olive! Greatly appreciated!
A. Sharma Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 11:44 AM
Beautiful write Lisa lee! Congrats on fine win !
Lee Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 12:11 PM
You're a sweetheart! Thank you, Dr. Upma!
Jerden Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 9:59 AM
Great imagery, Lisa. A real cowboy poem, not a stereotyped one. I was there with you, too.
Lee Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 10:47 AM
Thank you so much, Roy! So very glad you could see and feel what I saw in him and them...Cowboys Rock!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 9:03 AM
I enjoyed this winning piece, congrats.
Lee Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 9:16 AM
Thank you, Richard! So appreciate it!
Callus Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 8:58 AM
Hi Lisa! this sure makes for a pleasant read! love the take on the cowboy theme. congrats on a fine win. // paul
Lee Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 9:17 AM
Thank you, Paul! I'm tickled you enjoyed it!
A   Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 8:52 AM
Lisa, Congratulations, enjoyed your winning poem in Shadow's " Howdy Pard" contest... XOX~ LINDA
Lee Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 9:19 AM
Thanks so much, Poet! It means a lot to me...I'm honored!
Hamilton Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 7:58 AM
good poem Lisa congrats on win ty for entering hugs
Lee Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 9:10 AM
Thank you again, Shadow So Much, for the sweet words of encouragement! You made my Day! :)
Mehta Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 7:50 AM
Congratulation on a fine win on the cowboy theme, LISA
Lee Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 9:20 AM
Just am figuring out, this is where to reply...thanks again, Dr. Ram!
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