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Covered Loveless

Shhhhhh.. take a minute to listen.. it's faint sorta like a whisper can you hear it? there's a child crying in the distance just out of reach a futile existence without the assistance of its mother covered loveless.. born to perform in the chior of quiet angels humming hope choked by fairytales... i wish I could read her a story calmly comb her hair back gently lift her chin i would tell her that worth doesn't come in a bottle that monsters get scared too and mommy was just born broken but I can't seem to find that child anymore

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Richard Ferry

Date: 2/16/2013 9:01:00 PM

Hello Kimmy Just saw your reply. Not upset , just like to keep it less formal..One reason vanished to Costa Rica years ago..Tired of formalities. Much less formal down here, Senora or is it Senorita? Rick

David Williams

Date: 2/12/2013 8:23:00 AM

Kimmy this is an outstanding write, two lost voices, I love it and the format well done....you keep writing..David

The Situation

Date: 2/11/2013 6:27:00 PM

Touched

Justin Bordner

Date: 2/11/2013 2:38:00 PM

You got a style worth knowing Kimmy - the concept in the title of this work alone is fulfulling - you employ one of my favorite poetic instruments exceedingly well, alliteration, or caydance - I appreciate what you are reckoning - this is beautiful political poetry, and therefore spiritual - J.A.B. %

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/11/2013 9:09:00 AM

Very emotive and expressive work..I felt the sadness within the lines..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara

Rockman Pritts

Date: 2/10/2013 10:38:00 PM

Born to perform in the choir of quiet angels. That is beyond profound. You have a definate talent. I could spout lectures on structure and form and everything of the sort. But you are doing one thing right. You are being you. And that is all that counts. Keep it up because it's very good. Rockman

Kimmy Thieleke
Date: 2/11/2013 12:09:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading me and commenting. yes sir i am in the process of trying to learn how to structure my work. i have only been writing a short while. i have a lot to learn and am very excited to do so. i appreciate honesty and critique. thank you .

Wayland Bunch

Date: 2/10/2013 10:01:00 PM

First of all I want to thank you for your comment. Secondly, I'm fairly n Iew to this place myself, but there are some wonderful writers that are helpful and inspiring. I have only been writing a little over a year. I've written more poems here in two months than the previous year. It helps being around great writers. I liked this poem, it's sad, but well written. Nice job.

Kimmy Thieleke
Date: 2/11/2013 12:11:00 AM

thank you i appreciate it. i enjoy reading your poetry. still trying to learn the ropes myself.. lol.

Richard Ferry

Date: 2/10/2013 9:30:00 PM

Very nice I hear it Thanks for your comment Please don`t call me sir Rick

Kimmy Thieleke
Date: 2/11/2013 12:14:00 AM

Ok Rick.. oh goodness that aches me. i am so stricted on adressing persons as ma'am and sir never my intentions to eerk anyone. i shall try not to do that . oh i almost did it again. lol.